Wednesday, August 19, 2020
Rain poem
The rain is out in the cold will I am inside feeling warm in my home. When I'm inside my home I smell the sweet fragrance of delicious food. As I touch the door knob my sister jumps out and say boo, in a lound voice. As I walk I see my mum cooking and my dad cleaning. I felt very very gratitude. As I slept I got colder and colder, the wind started howling. I was frightened but then my mum came and everyone evacuated the house, it was like there was a thunder storm. I was horrified but everyone went back in the house. I went straight to sleep.
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Hi Angellynah,I like your poem about the rain. I like how you used different words instead of basic ones your writing is really interesting. Great Poem!
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Kia Ora Angellynah, keep it up with the creative writing well done on your Rain poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Angellynah! I'm confused about why people were evacuated though? Was there a fire alarm?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work :-)