I like how you have chosen your mood. As I read your story it makes me interested. I like how you have used your imagination to create your mood. How do you feel when you read your story? Your story has great detail into it, keep up the great work.
I like how you showed us how you changed it and your writing is great! How time did you need to make it? was the writing was hard? And I liked how you chosen your mood! Have a Nice day/night ^^ !
Kia Ora Khin Lin. Thank you for commenting on my blog. It took me 15 to 20 minutes. It wasn’t that hard because I’ve already done this kind of writing. Again thank you for commenting and have a good day!
Hello Angellynah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have chosen your mood. As I read your story it makes me interested. I like how you have used your imagination to create your mood. How do you feel when you read your story? Your story has great detail into it, keep up the great work.
Goodbye Angellynah
Hello Angeynah, I like how you added every detail so us readers can be really interested to it.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Angellynah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you showed us how you changed it and your writing is great!
How time did you need to make it?
was the writing was hard?
And I liked how you chosen your mood!
Have a Nice day/night ^^ !
Kia Ora Khin Lin.
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. It took me 15 to 20 minutes. It wasn’t that hard because I’ve already done this kind of writing. Again thank you for commenting and have a good day!