I am a learner at Glen Taylor School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 5 and my teacher is Mrs Dhaliwal.
Task Description:
For this task I had to learn about show not tell in our writing.
Kia Ora Angellynah,I was really satisfyed from reading your showing sentences, They were reallly outstanding! I enjoyed reading your show not tell tchart.
Kia Ora Angellynah,Reading your writing makes me interested to read more of your writing. The part when you described her eyes like bright red. I like how you have described how yum the cake was.*Question*If one of those things happened to you, how would you feel?Goodbye Angellynah, I hope you have a great day.
Kia Ora Angellynah,
ReplyDeleteI was really satisfyed from reading your showing sentences, They were reallly outstanding! I enjoyed reading your show not tell tchart.
Kia Ora Angellynah,
ReplyDeleteReading your writing makes me interested to read more of your writing. The part when you described her eyes like bright red. I like how you have described how yum the cake was.
*Question*
If one of those things happened to you, how would you feel?
Goodbye Angellynah, I hope you have a great day.